They asked for a ransom of $2,000 to return the boy. 16 , their plan quickly got out of control.
答案:(A) However
前文描述綁匪精心策劃綁架計畫、原本預期一切順利,這句「然而」轉折,計畫卻很快失控了,However(然而)符合這種「預期順利卻事與願違」的對比轉折;Accordingly(因此/於是)表順接因果,會變成「因為計畫了綁架,於是計畫就失控」,因果邏輯不通;Otherwise(否則)、Furthermore(此外)都不合。
However 你早就背過「然而」,這一格對多數人不難,但仍有一群人會挑 Accordingly,原因是前一句剛講完綁匪「藏好人、開價 $2,000 要贖金」,讀起來像一連串動作正往下推,於是順手填了「於是、因此」。空格在句首、後面接逗號,這個位置放的是連接副詞(linking adjunct),它唯一的工作就是標示「這一句和前一句是什麼關係」(劍橋 English Grammar Today),所以判斷的依據不在這一句裡面,一定要往回讀一句。
把前後兩句並排看:前一句是綁匪的「計畫」(藏人、開價 $2,000 要贖金),後一句是 their plan quickly got out of control(他們的計畫很快就失控了)。計畫周全 vs 立刻失控,是「本來以為會這樣、結果卻那樣」的對比,要用轉折。驗算方式很簡單:試著用 but 把兩句接起來 — They asked for a ransom, but their plan quickly got out of control. 接得起來,就填 however。這裡可以接上你國中就學過的 but:but 是連接詞,把兩個子句接成一句;however 是副詞,前面要用句號或分號斷開,自己後面再加逗號。意思幾乎一樣,標點卻不一樣,這是寫作時最常被扣分的地方。
Accordingly(因此、於是)是順接因果,填進去會變成「因為他們開價要贖金,所以計畫就失控了」— 但開價本身不會導致失控,真正的原因(小孩太皮)要到下一句才登場,因果對不上。Otherwise(否則、不然)需要一個「不這麼做就會如何」的條件,前一句沒有這種假設。Furthermore(此外、而且)是再補一項同方向的訊息,但「計畫失控」不是綁架步驟的追加說明,方向相反。
however(然而)、otherwise(否則、不然)、furthermore(此外、而且)、accordingly(因此、據此)、get out of control(失控)、ask for a ransom(索討贖金)、hold sb for ransom(挾持某人勒贖)、compensate for(彌補……)。
Bill and Sam decided to kidnap the son of a banker to compensate for their business loss. They kidnapped the boy and hid him in a cave. They asked for a ransom of $2,000 to return the boy.
16 , their plan quickly got out of control. Their young captive 17 to be a mischievous boy. He viewed the kidnapping as a wonderful camping trip. He demanded that his kidnappers play tiring games with him, such as riding Bill as a horse for nine miles. Bill and Sam were soon desperate and decided to 18 the little terror. They lowered the price to $1,500.
Yet, knowing perfectly well 19 a troublemaker his son was, the father refused to give them any money. 20 , he asked the kidnappers to pay him $250 to take the boy back. To persuade the boy to return home, Bill and Sam had to tell him that his father was taking him bear-hunting. The kidnappers finally handed over the boy and $250 to the banker and fled town as quickly as they could.